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Cool story, kewl writing... (constructive criticism inside)

Author: SoulTaker ()
Date: 2000-05-09 00:00:00

I like the story, I don't understand what's going on, though. We all like new characters and new places, but please don't go overboard with it. rRaminrodt created a large universe evolving around The Searcher (look in the forum directory to read the stories), with tons or weird names and concepts. Most people were really confused about all that stuff, and I, personally, often found it quite frustrating to read the stories and not really understand what was going on - there were so many new concepts, things and people that I couldn't keep track of everything.

Your story was cool, I liked it. I just don't hope that we'll be introduced to so many new things that we'll lose sight =)

SoulTaker

(Story) Technomage Prime (Story) - /Dev/Null - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
-Cool story, kewl writing... (constructive criticism inside) - SoulTaker - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
--Re:Cool story, kewl writing... (constructive criticism inside) - Tridus - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
---Re: Re:Cool story, kewl writing... (constructive criticism inside) - SoulTaker - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
-neat. I have no idea whats going on. but neat. - Tridus - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
--Quite frankly, you're not supposed to know what's going on. That's the whole point. (nt) - /Dev/Null - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
---well obviously. just like you don't know how to use the nt button. I was just commenting on it. - Tridus - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
----Whatever makes you think that I don't know how to use the nt button? (nt) - /Dev/Null - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
-----well its a tossup. - Tridus - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
-----Oh, and BTW, what is that riptide tag doing behind your username? - SoulTaker - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
------I changed my uername. And as for the NT button... - /Dev/Null - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
-------you can do that all you want, just leave the message empty. - Tridus - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
-------Well, FYI, you're going to be stuck with Roel and TerinUnit for a week, according to the poll =) - SoulTaker - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
--------Your silly little poll does not concern me. (nt) - /Dev/Null - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
---------Oh yeah? - SoulTaker - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
----------*Bans the both of them from ICQ and his forum* (nt) - /Dev/Null - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
-----------Fool... You cannot escape your punishment. - SoulTaker - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
------thats Akardam with a new name. - Tridus - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
-------Oh. OK =) - SoulTaker - 2000-05-09 00:00:00
-----Maybe the fact that you don't use the NT button? =) - SoulTaker - 2000-05-09 00:00:00