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Well, that was worth the wait...

Author: SoulTaker ()
Date: 2000-04-22 00:00:00

But I'm pretty confident that you did the ending in a hurry. Sure, I like a Klingon Bird of Prey as much as the next guy, but using Star Trek teleportation as a way to end the story is... Weird. Still, this one definitely one of the longest and best stories I've read fron you so far =)

While some things are very inconsistent (such as Tridus having time to write notes and install a funny signal thingy in his mouth while being kidnapped by an agent), I still enjoyed the story very much. Good work!

Oh, and BTW, I didn't know that Edge could do fireballs? Explanation, anyone?


(Storyverse Conclusion Storee) Redemption - SM_007 - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
-*applauds* Wow, that was really good! - undertow - 2000-04-23 00:00:00
-Well, that was worth the wait... - SoulTaker - 2000-04-22 00:00:00
--Correction and an answer. - SM_007 - 2000-04-22 00:00:00
---OK, that helped. - SoulTaker - 2000-04-22 00:00:00
-Man, look at all those typos, hehe. *Reinstalls Word 2000 so he doesn't have to use WordPad.* - SM_007 - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
--Yeah! I mean Best in the 'Glazy'? What were you thinking? - Psycho Sam! - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
---I was thinking that you're a big four-eyed lamo and you wear the same stupid sweater everyday. - SM_007 - 2000-04-22 00:00:00
-Tridus is just really really really smart. :) - Tridus - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
--Comment and a question. - SM_007 - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
---Re:Comment and a question. - Tridus - 2000-04-21 00:00:00