A Goon
There is no surer way to ruin a good discussion than to contaminate it with the facts.
- Cecil Adams
Spring starts in 0 days.
Modified: August 09 2006.
Hits: 7708536/11569638
User: Anonymous Coward
Time: 0.04 seconds.

Read Message

Comment and a question.

Author: SM_007 ()
Date: 2000-04-21 00:00:00

Yeah, looking back at the story, it's pretty obvious that Tridus was prepared for what happened (though I am assuming that the tracking device he had installed in the back of his teeth was there before all of the events which happened, and he just kept it there in case of emergencey). The tracking device he installed also broadcasted a signal (not unlike a cell phone) so Sashie could beam him the hell out of where he was.

And on another note, how'd you like the notion that the big-ass bad guys were no sweat to the Federation, who came back in time to take the agents back? :)

And just out of curiosity: What kinda inconsistensies did you notice? I am only asking because I wrote that story in a hurry, so I honestly didn't notice too many as I was writing it, though I was sure that they'd be there. So I am kinda curious to see what people find when they nitpick at my story. Trust me, I actually want you to point out some stuff. :)

Virtue mine honour

(Storyverse Conclusion Storee) Redemption - SM_007 - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
-*applauds* Wow, that was really good! - undertow - 2000-04-23 00:00:00
-Well, that was worth the wait... - SoulTaker - 2000-04-22 00:00:00
--Correction and an answer. - SM_007 - 2000-04-22 00:00:00
---OK, that helped. - SoulTaker - 2000-04-22 00:00:00
-Man, look at all those typos, hehe. *Reinstalls Word 2000 so he doesn't have to use WordPad.* - SM_007 - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
--Yeah! I mean Best in the 'Glazy'? What were you thinking? - Psycho Sam! - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
---I was thinking that you're a big four-eyed lamo and you wear the same stupid sweater everyday. - SM_007 - 2000-04-22 00:00:00
-Tridus is just really really really smart. :) - Tridus - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
--Comment and a question. - SM_007 - 2000-04-21 00:00:00
---Re:Comment and a question. - Tridus - 2000-04-21 00:00:00